Saturday, February 2, 2008

poetry blog slam

apparently I have some more inner healing to do. when I read sarah's latest post (latest at the time of my writing this at least. I swear she can post more in one day than I can think of in one week) my first thought was "poetry slam, huh? I wonder how long til one of my poems gets slammed." strange the thoughts one can think when there isn't enough caffeine in the bloodstream yet.

one thing I know ... my favourite poem (ok, two things. I also know my favourite number). I have digested and fallen in love with much poetry, but this one for some reason will not let me go. It is raw and stunning and not exactly homeschoolblogger material.

michael ondaatje * the cinnamon peeler's wife

If I were a cinnamon peeler

I would ride your bed

and leave the yellow bark dust

on your pillow.

Your breasts and shoulders would reek

you could never walk through markets

without the profession of my fingers

floating over you. The blind would

stumble certain of whom they approached

though you might bathe

under raingutters, monsoon.

Here on the upper thigh

at this smooth pasture

neighbour to your hair

or the crease

that cuts your back. This ankle.

You will be known among strangers

as the cinnamon peeler's wife.

I could hardly glance at you

before marriage

never touch you

-your keen nosed mother, your rough brothers.

I buried my hands

in saffron, disguised them

over smoking tar,

helped the honey gatherers ...

when we swam once

I touched you in water

and our bodies remained free,

you could hold me and be blind of smell.

You climbed the bank and said

this is how you touch other women

the grasscutter's wife, the limeburner's daughter

and you searched your arms

for the missing perfume

and knew

what good is it

to be the lime burner's daughter

left with no trace

as if not spoken to in an act of love

as if wounded without the pleasure of a scar.

You touched

your belly to my hands

in the dry air and said

I am the cinnamon

peeler's wife. Smell me.

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

At someone alphabetic алексия)))))